the tom drum is overpowering and it is very repetitive
the guitar and other stuff is very good, so i think you should try putting more variety into the drums
I can hear what you're talking about. I think I'll address that when I toy around with this sometime. I've got an idea to fix the monotone drums. ;)
no no no
please practice more
claps dont fit in
no noticeable theme
just an earsore, really
but thats fine, just go back to fl studio and play around with it a lot more!
you dont even like the build up near the end where i keep adding beats? and yes i just noticed that the claps dont fit in and the harmony does not fit in with the drums.
stock fl samples/sounds (especially that "ahh" singing voice, yuck!)
what was wrong again? BTW this is the first VERY ROUGH version.
I love the way the melody accentuates your voice. Maybe an improvement could be to make it longer? Lol... 4 seconds is a bit short. Other than that, I am feelin' thisegroove. You have a bright future ahead of you. Please, keep it up!!! :) :) :)
your a spic
OOO DISS PWNT >:C
that you are using fl studio
beat is pretty bland, too, but would be made better with less obvous fl usage
It wasn't that bad, but got a little annoying after a while.
no no no no no
go back to the drawing board
Test is test.
Good for a test.
Nicely done, but needs work on the beginning percussion, seems to stick out like a sore thumb.
Even though there's not much of you own creativity in here, I applaud you on making a very nice MIDI out of Jordan.
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